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PEER REVIEW 1

I asked my two class mates for some feedback

Does my work match up to my proposal ? 

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- I got told it does match up to my proposal and I can improve my general proposal SoI.

What do they like of my work? 

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- They like the  primary imagery of the skate park, and the relative research behind the pictures

What do I need to improve?

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- I need to improve my edits and the amount of work I put out. ( I agree with this statement I'm looking to be more creative and experiment more)

Where am I in my project for the time I've got?

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- Being half way, I'm a bit behind with some edits and definitely behind for the making the video.

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